Winter Wonderland

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I turned up in a magical place. I don’t know how I got here. I am freezing I feel like I am trapped in a skyscraper palace . I keep walking and the snow is as thick as a big puffy cloud that has bursted. It is so cold I can hardly take another step in the snow. The snow is as bright as a moon falling to earth.  I am so cold I feel like a popsicle that has been in a freezer for ever. The trees are as brown as melted chocolate. I can hear the snow crunching why I take my footsteps and the snow is so crispy. I can taste the cold air in my mouth .

I say to myself “ this is amazing I have never seen anything like it.” I feel a drop on my shoulder .It has started to snow . Snowflakes start to fall out of the sky. A snowflake dropped on my tongue. It is so cold.

The wind is starting to blow that my hair is going everywhere. The wind starts blowing harder and harder   the wind starts whistling it is hurting my ears. I am sinking in the snow more and more.

At the end of the path I can see two  giant pine trees covered with snow. I start running towards them to get a closer look .  I didn’t see the big rock. I had tripped over it. I look down at the ground . I did not realise how white the snow was. It is as white as vanilla ice cream. I slowly get back up and start heading towards the pine trees even more . I looked up in the sky. I feel like ant crawling along the snow.

I was right  there standing in front  of the pine trees until I heard a voice saying” Mya come on we are going home now”. It was my Mum . We had to go home. I did not want to leave this amazing  place . I know I had to. I got in the car and said “ by magical place I will never forget you. “ When I arrived at home I was sitting next to the fire with a hot chocolate .