Hi Mya, my name is Mishaela and I am a Year 8 at Paihia School. I really like how you have lots of information about what you were reading. The thing I like about that presentation is the Vegemite and Marmite slide, I thought that was something to read as we had to choose a blog. Did you enjoy that presentation?
Kia Ora Mya. That is one weird fact about vegemite and marmite making you happier. I like how you set out the presentation you can read really easily. I was hooked by your topic sentences. I like how you read the story and then summarized what you read about it.
Hi Mya, My name is Cheyenne from Paihia School. I really like your kiwi kids new presentation. I like how you have used a lot of detail. Keep up the good work.
Hi Mya, my name is Mishaela and I am a Year 8 at Paihia School. I really like how you have lots of information about what you were reading. The thing I like about that presentation is the Vegemite and Marmite slide, I thought that was something to read as we had to choose a blog. Did you enjoy that presentation?
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Kia Ora Mya. That is one weird fact about vegemite and marmite making you happier.
ReplyDeleteI like how you set out the presentation you can read really easily. I was hooked by your topic sentences. I like how you read the story and then summarized what you read about it.
Hi Mya,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Cheyenne from Paihia School. I really like your kiwi kids new presentation. I like how you have used a lot of detail. Keep up the good work.