This time last week I was getting ready to compete in the West Coast Rotary Speeches. I can remember my stomach dancing with butterflies as I was anxiously waiting for it to be 5:30pm. After school I started to get ready. I put on my best looking uniform. Did my hair nice and put on all of my badges. It was time. We were driving to the union. We went and sat at our table and people started coming around and talking to me about the process. During that time I found out what number I was going to be.I was seventh. We got dinner and dessert. Afterwards it was time. The six speeches before flied by. It was my time to shine. Then it came to prize giving. I came second out of nine contestants. I was so happy. If you ever get to experience Rotary Speech then give it your all!
Hi Mya,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Aaliyah and I am a year 7 student currently attending St Pius X Catholic School. I really liked your writing, I felt like I was there with you. I think you should add more writing around the part when you were going to say your speech. I feel like if you explained how you felt during your speech, it would of made your writing a bit better. Also, congratulations on coming second!
Good Job,
Aaliyah